Author's Note: This is a creative piece about now a day love, gone far.
I ring
the doorbell. I turn for a moment and see a leaf run across the driveway. My mind is fixed on the knob as it turns open. Brad’s mother
greets me with a soft hug.
“Brad’s
with his eye doctor in the living room. He will be done in a couple minutes.”
explains Brad’s mom. She gives me a smile and walks towards the kitchen. I
remove my jacket and place it on the wooden coat hanger, probably crafted by
Brad’s dad. I sit on the step and remove my shoes and place them by my jacket.
As i turn the corner, my eyes meet Brad who is sitting at a round wooden table
with his doctor. They are fixing with a rubix cube doing all these confusing
color practices.
“Focus
Brad.” says his eye doctor. I give a sigh. The doctor turns around and looks at
me.
“Hello
there. Are you the girl Brad was talking to me about?” says the doctor.
“John!”
yells brad quietly at his eye doctor.
“I don't
know. I am dating Brad though.” I explain.
“That's a
nice dress you have on. Too bad Brad here doesn't know how gorgeous the color
is.”
“Shut
up.” yells Brad in a jokingly manner.
Brad is
colorblind. He can only see black and white. Doctor John White helps him
increase his vision on colors. They meet often, which sometimes can get
annoying.
“My work
here is done.” says Doctor White. I watch as he puts papers and a rubix cube in
a brown leather briefcase. My mind is now focused on Brad who approaches me
with a smile. I wrap my arms around his neck to give him a big hug. His cheeks
turn peachy-red as always.
“Alana,
are you hungry?” asks Brad’s mom from the kitchen. I can barely hear her.
Brad’s house is quite large, almost twice the size of mine. It is home to just
Brad and his parents.
“No
thanks, I ate before I got here!” I reply. I lied. I’m starving.
Me and
Brad head towards the back door and head outside into the backyard. We walk
across the yard until we arrive in the woods which leads to a small lake. Brad
is quite taller than I am, about a head or so taller. He is quite athletic too,
captain of the varsity volleyball team. He wraps hand around mine as we stare
into the lake ahead. Our minds focused on the smooth sounds of the waves
crashing the rocky shore.
“How are
your eyes?” I asked.
“Better.
I still have my color problems.” replies Brad.
“That
sucks”
“My
doctor is a pain. He is such a poop sometimes”
“Some
people just need to be hit with a brick”
“For
sure, you should try volleyball”
“I don't
think so...” I suck at volleyball.
“All my
teammates girlfriends all play volleyball, except Adam”
“Well
cause he is actually normal...”
“What?”
“Nothing....
I said cause they are a good couple” Brad can be annoying sometimes. He thinks
he is the
coolest, but he's not. My ex was more popular than him.
“I
seriously think you should play volleyball. Tennis is stupid.”
“Shut up.
No its not.”
“Admit
it, its dumb”
“And boys
volleyball is cool? Its only cool if you actually good.”
“I’m the
captain of the varsity team!”
“You guys
aren’t even that good! Your 2-11!”
“So
what!”
“I think
you need to pipe down! I’m leaving” I stand up and walk back towards Brad’s
house.
“No wait!
I’m sorry!” Yells Brad from behind. I don't look back. I walk towards the house
in rage. I trip over a weed. My pants have mud all over them. I wish I had
never met him. I walk in through the back door, greeted by Brad’s mom.
“Where’s
Brad?” she asks.
“Shut
up!” I yell. Probably wasn't the smartest choice. I'm responded by words that
I’ve never heard come out of her mouth. I walk straight for the foyer and slip
on my shoes and jacket. I hear Brad walk in the back door just as I step
outside. Him and her mom are arguing in the kitchen. I laugh at the idea that
just popped into my head.
I open
the zipper of my backpack and pull out a small box of matches I had used for a
science project. My mouth turns to a grin as I scrape the white film right off the match. Fire is burning on the tip of the match. I throw it on the wood
paneling around the Dining room window. I light another and do the same. And
then another. And another, until the box is no longer full of matches. I watch
as the flames grow. I then hear a scream come inside. I go in opened garage and
pull out a 5 gallon container of gasoline. I bring it next to the flame and
watch as the oil rises the fire. I walk over to my bag. I walk down the
driveway, not looking back once.
Great story Evan you used great word choice
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